Samia, Kisayah, Maria and Benjamin - thank you for writing and sharing Boy Overboard! Your very descriptive writing gave me a sense of what it would have been like for the boy to suddenly be in the water and struggling. You then went on to create great suspense. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Best wishes and keep practising your writing Barbara Kells
Samia, Kisayah, Maria and Benjamin - thank you for writing and sharing Boy Overboard! Your very descriptive writing gave me a sense of what it would have been like for the boy to suddenly be in the water and struggling. You then went on to create great suspense. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
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Barbara Kells
I like the strong descriptive languge ,it was very intense and gripping
ReplyDeleteHarrison from Bayfield Primary .
Hi Harrison, we love that you enjoyed our piece of writing. Have a great day.
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